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PostSubject: Do you think i'm a good poet?   Thu Sep 16, 2010 2:54 am

These are origianly by me! Please do not copy them from me because i worked hard to write these:

Sadness is...
A large path you searched and can't find your way out
A rainy cloud upon you and dosen't go away
A passion for someone who doesn't feel the same way for you
An animal in need of an owner to love

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My Grandma
My Grandma was so weak,
she couldn't even speak.

She's laying in bed,
with an aching head.

We're about to cry,
as i'm saying good-bye

The next day,
to the hospital on our way.

We got there that day,
they told us she passed away.

A tear down my face they see, Sad
my grandma has now left me

(this poem is based on a true story, it really happened)

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PostSubject: Re: Do you think i'm a good poet?   Thu Sep 16, 2010 8:39 pm

those are amazing! you are a great poet!
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PostSubject: Re: Do you think i'm a good poet?   Sat Sep 18, 2010 4:08 pm

YOU are a fantastic poet, my friend. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Do you think i'm a good poet?   Sat Sep 18, 2010 5:22 pm

Thank you Lilly Very Happy

Thank you Remi Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Do you think i'm a good poet?   Sat Sep 18, 2010 7:47 pm

You are Great At Making this Poems!
Keep Up the Good Work!
I <3 All Of Them!
I could never make poems great as that!!

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PostSubject: Re: Do you think i'm a good poet?   Sun Sep 19, 2010 2:22 am

Thank you bff Smile
i really appriciate these comments because it makes me want to write more poetry Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Do you think i'm a good poet?   Fri Oct 22, 2010 1:06 pm

wow...! your really good..! don't stop keep going
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