Do you think i'm a good poet?

These are origianly by me! Please do not copy them from me because i worked hard to write these:

Sadness is...
A large path you searched and can't find your way out
A rainy cloud upon you and dosen't go away
A passion for someone who doesn't feel the same way for you
An animal in need of an owner to love

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My Grandma
My Grandma was so weak,
she couldn't even speak.

She's laying in bed,
with an aching head.

We're about to cry,
as i'm saying good-bye

The next day,
to the hospital on our way.

We got there that day,
they told us she passed away.

A tear down my face they see,
my grandma has now left me

(this poem is based on a true story, it really happened)

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will edit soon

those are amazing! you are a great poet!

YOU are a fantastic poet, my friend.

Thank you Lilly

Thank you Remi

You are Great At Making this Poems!
Keep Up the Good Work!
I <3 All Of Them!
I could never make poems great as that!!

Thank you bff
i really appriciate these comments because it makes me want to write more poetry

wow...! your really good..! don't stop keep going